We all have our own version of writing and editing. I tend to write and edit in layers, simply termed the layering technique. My work schedule forces me to limit my writing and editing time to nights and weekends and/or holidays. I have to be intentional with my time. For this reason, I trained myself to write in layers and lists.
I write a skeleton draft, layer up, then make lists of what else I need to do, change, and edit. In many ways, I will pants my skeleton and plot my flesh. Basically, I know WHAT I want to write and the premise of the story, but in order to build it up with depth and twists and details, I will need to better organize the structure.
Here’s my step-by-step method:
Step 1: When I draft, I write a skeleton draft, just to get the entire story out of my head. Sometimes I know the beginning and the end, but not the middle. And at all times, I’m drafting with chunky holes. I try not to linger around these holes for too long because it will bog me down in my drafting. Instead, my drafts will have bolded reminders such as:
- DIALOGUE – CHARACTERS TALK ABOUT SOMETHING SIGNIFICANT
- SETTING – DESCRIBE WHATS AROUND
- ACTION – SOMEONE DIES HERE
- FAILURE – CHARACTER DOES SOMETHING TO MESS UP
- HOOK – FIGURE OUT A BETTER CHAPTER HOOK
- GROWTH – CHARACTER CHANGES SOMEHOW
- SENSES – DESCRIBE ONE OR MORE OF 5 SENSES
- MORE – NEED MORE HERE DUNNO WHAT
I try to be nice, but sometimes I scold myself in my own edits and comments. It’s okay, I usually forgive myself later when I get the writing the way I want it.
Step 2: I create a spreadsheet outline per chapter and organize major scenes on notecards. This is my version of plotting. I have combined the story structure with the character growth arc along with the chapter by chapter plot points. I am a big picture sort of person and need to see everything in one place. You can download a template of my spreadsheet and maybe you will find it helpful in your writing process. Manuscript Chapter Outline Template.
Here are some helpful resources for the character’s journey and the plot structure:
Step 3: Next, I will do another drafting pass to fill in the holes and expand the setting, the atmosphere, the characters, etc. My goal is to get rid of those bolded holes I listed in Step 1.
Step 4: Send to a Critique Partner and take a break. I spend this time away from the story. Maybe I jot down notes here and there, but mostly, I want another set of eyes in the early stages to help me with the direction of my story.
Step 5: Once I hear back from my CP, there’s more revisions, structuring, and eliminating crutch/filter words. Here’s a list of typical Crutch Words.
Step 6: I send out my story to a first round of beta readers and repeat Step 5, then repeat Step 6, before moving on to the querying stage.
Honestly, I never feel like my manuscript is done and I can always improve my story, edit more, and change things. You have to be open to change.
Good luck with your writing and editing endeavors!
Quick note: I write in Google Docs and have not tried Scrivener.